The choice of music at the start and the end works well. The change in the score is a good idea and matches the shift from black and white to colour; however, the language there would not be acceptable to be shown on TV, I fear. It would have been good if the shift matched a more obvious change in the narrative, ie. the colour showing a more positive part of the narrative. The close up of the little girl at the end is effective but should be matched by a slogan - spelling out what the charity wants us to do perhaps. Some good ideas there; in an ideal world, you would have a chance to fine-tune the editing to clarify your message. Good effort there nonetheless!
Hope you enjoy the video...some feedback would be nice :)
ReplyDeleteThe choice of music at the start and the end works well. The change in the score is a good idea and matches the shift from black and white to colour; however, the language there would not be acceptable to be shown on TV, I fear. It would have been good if the shift matched a more obvious change in the narrative, ie. the colour showing a more positive part of the narrative. The close up of the little girl at the end is effective but should be matched by a slogan - spelling out what the charity wants us to do perhaps. Some good ideas there; in an ideal world, you would have a chance to fine-tune the editing to clarify your message. Good effort there nonetheless!
ReplyDeletewill take the criticism on board, thank you! :)
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